Thanks! The one comment I didn't respond to in my "Your Comments" story was yours in which you said you didn't like how you had to read to the end of the BYB story in order to find out what happened. I'll admit that I was trying something different, trying for a classic "story" style like that in fiction writing. That you read to the end to find out what happened actually made me happy; that you didn't like the trip, bothers me a bit. I'll admit that, given that you read, I'm calling it a moral victory if nothing else!